Twilite: It's in the laugh

I don't think she noticed the "evil" part.

Sorry for the quality, but I switched over to a new style. Usually it's a lot cleaner than this, but these are just little shorts anyway so as long as it gets the point across, then it doesn't matter. <3

Anyway, again this idea comes from the lovely people at Vampirely. In this particular case, there were about a dozen comments branching off of one idea, focused primarily on this genius example of SMeyer writing:

“Aro started to laugh. “Ha, ha, ha,” he chuckled.”

After which followed a slew of disbelief and enjoyable fun. I was almost in tears. Not only because of this poor excuse of writing but also because it was just. Too. Hilarious.

As Android 21 observed:

“Moreover, it requires commas? Did the red squiggly line bother her so much that she simply couldn’t ignore it?”

Apparently.

Twilight (c) SMeyer
Twilite (c) MC Paul

Other Twilites:

Biology Class [link]
Biology Class 2 [link]
Pet Perfection [link]
Gamer Girl [link]